Bio

Not only is Hollie Suzanne Godfrey a three-time winner of the Good Citizenship award from Holy Infant Elementary School, but she is also a fresh new short story author. When she is not spending time with her family and friends, you can usually find her drinking hazelnut coffee or reading about the latest Taylor Swift news. She plans to attend the University of Missouri in the fall of 2016 and begin studying communication disorders and speech pathology.

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7 comments

  1. Alec Baris · September 17, 2015

    I think there is a typo in the first sentence. But good overall!

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  2. madidefoe · September 17, 2015

    love this!

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  3. asparksschuler470 · September 17, 2015

    I like the first bit of humor, but then the last sentence is a really sudden change in tone. It goes from humorous to abruptly serious.

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  4. morganclaypool · September 17, 2015

    What a cool middle name!

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  5. thegreenclairevoyant · October 15, 2015

    Content: 5
    Language Use: 5
    Grammatical Accuracy: 4 (erase the “but” in the first sentence)

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  6. thegreenclairevoyant · October 15, 2015

    Content: I think its good just make sure the tone is the same throughout.
    Language Use: Word choice is proper for the bio.

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  7. miasopapilla · October 16, 2015

    Content: 4 Definitely describes who you are, but maybe you could find a different order for the sentences…it’s a little unorganized.

    Language Use: 5 Word choice is perfect!!!

    Grammatical Accuracy:4 comma in the first sentence in between “fresh” and “new”!!!

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